Winter Holiday Story

Last week I described how I approach this activity. I started the process this week and I will now describe how it's going.

Day I.
We created a list of problems for a story with a winter holiday theme. The kids seemed to be in a particularly inspired frame of mind, which led to a lively session. It’s necessary for you, the teacher, to maneuver the discussion in such a way that you get a variety of suggestions. Don’t be afraid to distil out weak ideas.  With a little tact you can encourage your students to think hard, and to be original. If they get hung up on some basic idea, tell them we need to change to a new idea. An important part of the process is for you to suggest examples too. Every so often, especially when the kids offer timid ideas, I model more adventurous ways to approach story problems.  For example: Santa’s reindeer were on vacation in Hawaii and refuse to go to the North Pole in December.
When I throw out some crazy ideas, it sparks excitement in the kids, and gets them thinking more creatively.
 First, they came up with ideas about Santa and various problems with the presents.  Examples: All the elves had flu; there was a shortage of toy-making materials; Santa’s sleigh had a mechanical problem; etc. The best one was the following: Because of Global Warming, the ice on which Santa’s workshop sits, melted and fell into the Arctic days before Christmas!
It was time to steer them in a different direction. Let’s think about kids and people. What would make someone unhappy or worried at this time of the year? I managed to get ideas like these: A family lost their home and had live in a shelter; all the Christmas trees were sold out .
Time to move on to something new. I said, “What are some other problems we can think of to do with winter? What do you think about when you of winter?” Someone said “snow”. Can you think of problems to do with snow? First I got the usual type of response, like getting caught in a snowstorm. Then someone said: Scientists were in Antarctica and they encountered aliens. This led to another student suggesting: A group of snowdragons wanted to destroy Earth.
By the end of the session I had a list of twelve pretty decent problems and a class of kids eager to get started!

Day 2. The kids selected a problem, then did a quickwrite of a story. I told them it was a pre first draft, just to get the basic idea of a story down on paper. I gave them half an hour for this.

Day 3. They made a picture of the most important setting in the story, then wrote a paragraph describing the setting.
Day 4. In a paragraph, they wrote a description of either the main character, or, if the story was in first person, of an important character in the story.
Day 5. The problem – frame-by-frame. I had not taught this skill before, so I needed a full hour for this lesson. Because this is an advanced skill, I felt the best way to teach it would be to model the process using a student’s problem.
Me: Who would like to tell me their problem?
Student:  Santa’s reindeer had disappeared.
Me:  I am going to draw 6 frames on the board and we are going to write down exactly what went on in sequence.  So, what happened first? Who discovered the reindeer were missing?
Student: An elf.
Me: What was his name? And tell me exactly how he made the discovery.
Student: His name was Gorgy. Gorgy went to the stables and the reindeer weren’t there.
Me: Okay, let’s back up and picture the whole thing. Class, we are all going to help Sara with this, so please give us your ideas. Gorgy leaves his cottage, or Santa’s workshop and is walking toward the stables. Does he notice anything before he reaches the stables? Can anyone tell me?
Second Student: He sees hoof-prints in the snow.
Me: Great. Let’s fill out our first two frames. Gorgy steps out of the workshop and walks toward the reindeer’s stables. He notices hoof-prints in the snow. What is he thinking now?
Third Student: He is puzzled and races to the stables.
Me: Good. Let’s write that down in our third frame. What’s the next thing he sees? Pretend you are Gorgy. What are you seeing? How are you feeling?
Fourth Student: The stable door is open. Gorgy panics.
Me: Excellent. You guys are getting the idea. Let’s put that in our fourth frame and fill out the rest of the frames.
With student help I wrote: When Gorgy got to the stables he saw hay scattered all over, but no reindeer. In shock he ran to tell Santa what happened.

We have just taken the most important part of the story and we wrote details to help the reader understand the story and the problem better. Now it’s your turn to do a frame by frame description of your problem. Picture it. Imagine you are there experiencing it.

I have to say, about half the class got grumpy about this task. I quickly realized that this was not an easy skill for third graders. I worry when I push my students too hard. As I walked around the classroom helping kids, I got the impression that they understood what to do in theory. This was great. Obviously not everyone is going to get it the first time. But the next time we do a story they will be more receptive to this part of the writing process. On a positive note, I have a significant number of strong writers who embraced the frame-by-frame exercise.

Winter Holiday Story

I have just started the following writing activity this week, and wanted to share how I execute the project. In this task I go into plot development in more detail. In writing this narrative my students use all the skills I have taught thus far, as well as a more complex plot structure.

The process takes about two weeks, maybe even three, from start to the final drafts. It’s very important to keep up the excitement level, and not to make them feel stressed ore overwhelmed. Pace these steps as it works for you. I start with a series of workshops before they write out their first draft.

Prepare kids first by reading a selection of picture books related to the winter holidays.

1. Remind kids that every story has a problem that the main character tries to solve. Brainstorm problems  with a winter holiday theme. List the problems on chart paper.

2. Now ask the kids to write a story. This should be a stress-free exercise intended to help germinate an idea. This will not be their first draft!!
3. Hand kids a story map in which they write down who the characters are, what the setting is, and what the problem is.
4. Main character. Write a paragraph describing the main character or an important character in your story. Tell what they look like and what their personalities are like.
5. Setting. What’s the most important setting in your story? Illustrate this on white paper. Then make a table with four squares labeled: Sights, Sounds, Smells, Feel. The kids then complete the table, using their picture to help them.
6. Write a paragraph of this setting
7. Now focus on the problem. On white paper use a frame by frame graphic to sketch out the problem in detail. How does it start? How does the main character react? How does the problem affect the character?
8. Plotting. Explain how writers develop plot in a story. The main character thinks about how to solve the problem. Usually he/she fails at the first two attempts, but learns from the experience, which helps him/her solve it at the third attempt. This is the magic of 3. Refer back to the stories you read aloud as examples.


Now have the kids complete the following plot diagram.

First Try                        Second Try                               Solution



The kids are now ready to write their story plugging in the descriptions of their character and setting in the appropriate places. These could in fact be their first two paragraphs if you want to make the process easier.
As they begin writing, I like to put up a list of words that they are not allowed to use. I call them “banned” words. These are: good, nice, great, cool, bad, stuff, things.
They may use a thesaurus if they are stuck for a synonym of these words.

When they are done with their first draft, they should do some revising and editing on their own.
First, look at the opening sentence. I do not allow them to start with “One day …”, or “Once upon a time …”, or “Once.” Just cross off those words and the sentence would be a whole lot stronger.

Do not use the word “and” more than once in a sentence. (Learn the rule first before you can break it!).

Avoid starting a sentence with the word “Then”.

Fix spelling.

Put periods at the end of sentences.

Fix other punctuation.

Capitalize all proper nouns, etc.

After they’ve done their editing, it’s time for you to go through their stories and help them clean it up.

Time for publishing!!